Friday, June 22, 2007

Chapter 25: The Setting Sun

Chapter 26: Reconciling

Chapter 27: Wind and Stars

Thoughts?


This post is your opportunity to comment on any miscellaneous items, such as:


• What did you think of the book overall?

• Did the themes of the fall (up or down), revelation, science, the interplay of revelation and science, coming of age, relationships, pride, flying, etc. jive with the Greek mythology/Mormon doctrine packaging?

• Were there issues of my writing style -- mechanics or substance -- that worked or didn't work for you?

• Was it paced well?

• Did you want to turn the page?

• Did you feel for the characters?

• Who would you say is the audience for this book?

• If you had to give a twenty-word synopsis of the book, what would it be?

• Publishing tips?