Monday, July 2, 2007

Chapter 1: Falling Into Heaven

2 comments:

Becky said...

Steve, what do you think Isaac's main problem for the story is? Is it his relationship with his dad? With his unattainable girl? Why is he brooding and how much is he like you and how much is he different? Would you say your book is a science fiction romance? How would you describe it on the jacket cover? I am still reading !! And I'm still stinkin proud of you!

Becky said...

Now I'm thinking some more and maybe his flaw (by that I mean flaw/problem) is his pride and his full of himself attitude. The Braggart in him. If that's what his main failings are then lets get a bit of a sense of that right here in the beginning so we can look for it all along the way, like lining up the clues to solve the puzzle.

Again, as I browse through your blog I'm just loving this art work and very impressed with your assimiliation of all these pictures. I think that if your book can evoke the same mood then you've got a masterpiece on your hands!!